DShark's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[forbidden union DEMO]

Need some work but its coming along.

Heres what I see that needs to be fixed:
-if your gonna make the same fucking house over and over again, the least you could do is add some more detail to it. Oh yeah and the fires were poorly drawn.
-your combat system was tacticless. More moves please.
-the menus looked crappy. Get photoshop or illustrator and make something that looks nice, and dont use flourecent colors.

BlazingEdge responds:

ill try and get them fixed ty

[Nephi's Adventure]

Mormon?

That was mormon? i didnt realise it till the end and was reading the reviews but i guess I'm a moron! Haha! Anywho great game and the voice acting didnt bug me at all like it usually does in point and clicks *cough* Jack French "cough*. I realise it is a comon complaint but I agree it was a little short. I think the interface was a little clunky like where it was placed it was a little hard to grab the rope. i also got stuck becasue i didnt realise the browserr window wasnt big enough. oh well great game and i await a second one :D

BoMToons responds:

Yeah, story is based on the BoM. Thanks for the review...glad you liked it.

[Jack French #2]

Nice game

That was an intresting game. I cant wait for the next one! i think your graphics could use a thouch up... maybe dont relye(spelled wrong...its too late :P) so heavily on outlines and just use gradients and such for coloring. also the voice acting for the janitor kid...was really bad... uhh yeah. also it could use some ambiance music. you may say well that would be to big of a file... but doesnt tom let some good ones go over? this was a good one! lol i loved ti and cant wait for the next :D

Johnnybdesign responds:

Thanks for the comments and I will take them into account when preparing the 3rd installement of the series.
JB

[[SB] Spiritual Warrior SE]

nice...

but she wasnt...lol. the line "get the hell out" is kind of ironic isnt it?

FattyWhale responds:

Ha, thanks for the review

[City Shootout]

not bad for a first sub.

i think there could be a bit more interactivity added to it. like if u made the cross hairtrail behind where the cursor would be... u know like slower then the mouse arrow. and maybe make it jiggle after the shots. and it could also use some sound FX for the shots too. next time u might wanna find a better song, i wasnt digging it. if you are gonna spend all that time working on a game try spending a bit more time on the BG. over all not a bad game keep working on it ull get better.

CarlJ responds:

Just added crosshair trailing behind the mouse, stuck on how to make it jiggle after shots though.

[Asteroid Field (complete)]

nice>:)

good game but i dont think Paradise in E really matched the game... shoulda been some fast paced D N'B. other than that this game looks great and i WILL go to your site :). good luck with the games and KEEP IT UP! :)

MikeSever responds:

I guess you're right. I thought it created the feeling of being in space, that's why I liked it.

[Bounce Bounce Revolutions]

needs...

-sound
-return to menu
- when player 2 died his ball was still there...
not THAT bad

NICFLIC responds:

Hit enter to return to the menu... I guess I should of mentioned that...

[Family guy soundboard v.2]

uhhh

quagmire didnt work... so yeah... umm make him work... and then ill grade hire...

please double check ur flashes before posting em!

toasterclock responds:

please read the fine print in the authors comment it will have the answer!

[Kingdom Fire Demo]

amaaaazzziiinnngggg!

sweet job il probably see this on the fronr page soon...

Nemo responds:

Thanks Dshark! I'm glad you liked it! I hope the time I put into the production of this game was well worth it, though by your comments I'm sure it was! Thanks again for your time!