Not bad...
Think you could do with a bit of increase in speed. being a movie about fighter jets i would recomend some harder music the opening to this looked really good. and i think there coud be some more action. when u hadt the fighter jet in the end and you were looking at the pilot whatever it said on the side was moving seperately from the jet... maybe you should put them on the same layer. and if you would like me to voice act just message me. :D good luck with the rest of the series dude :D